Two tags of yours had some potential to be really good, actually. So if you don't mind, I'm going to comment on those! It's been a long while since I've given any critique so bear with me.
Okay so there's a few things here that throw me off. The text being the main issue. First of all, I would avoid drop-shadows like the plague if I were you. Secondly, I would also avoid using such basic sans-serif fonts in tags with so many effects, it goes against the theme of the tag itself. The background does little for the text either, so I would suggest taking it out.
Now with the text out of the way there's room to look at a number of positives. The first being the use of flow here. the C4D's used go nicely with it, especially with the positioning of Kirito, you get a neat counter flow. However one thing that does bother me is the lack of sharpness on your render (Kirito) and the over-sharpening on the C4D in the foreground. I would suggest ensuring that your render is high enough quality, and/or isn't too blurred. Remember that the focal here is Kirito and not the C4D.
The background lacks something, it seems to be quite bare and the sort of
splattered light effects also look somewhat blurred beyond decent quality. I would suggest building up your backgrounds a bit more with C4D's or other effects. Also this tag would have benefited from either being slightly shorter, or slightly wider. Right now it looks like too much of a boxed triangle, and you want to go for a more dramatic dimension selection.
What I like most about this is the use of colour and quality: it's not overdone. However the center focal kills it so much. What I would have suggested here would be to make it off center, and the tag as a whole a bit shorter. For example,
I've just done a simple crop/flip horizontal here, and it already gives the tag a bit more drama. As I say, the choice of colours and effects were pretty good. They're a bit messy in
some places, and a bit too empty
in others however. Just make sure that all effects stick with, and aid the flow of the tag.
Keep it up.
