Gokey Shuckle
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Yay, I made a card. Wording confuses me though. It's not my best part of cards. What do you think?
May's Munchlax
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Yay, I made a card. Wording confuses me though. It's not my best part of cards. What do you think?
Castrainer
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What? The power lets ya transform Munchlax into May's Munchlax? If thats it, okay... If it is not, I got confused @_@
The attack is nice, but... What happens if ya go to the bench? Ya cant use it anymore in NO WAY of using it again?
Overall, nice, but a bit confusing texts...
The attack is nice, but... What happens if ya go to the bench? Ya cant use it anymore in NO WAY of using it again?
Overall, nice, but a bit confusing texts...
Gokey Shuckle
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Lets say you used the attack 2 times already. It goes to the bench, then it goes back as the Active Pokemon. It can only use the attack 2 more times. The Pokepower is suppose to say "May's Munchlax" Not just "Munchlax."
I might fix it later.
I might fix it later.
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I understand the Poke Power now. I like it. I don't see any noticeable errors and the art is cool. Good job!
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Well who said that you can't evolve into yourself =p
As for the attack, it definitely confuses me... you really have to be clear, like the situation with the bench... I'll rather word the attack something like...
"If there is 1 munch counter on May's Munchlax, this attack deals 10 damage. For every additional munch counters attached on May's Munchlax, double the damage dealed by this attack before any calculations. When you have more than 4 munch counters on May's Munchlax, this attack does nothing. When May's Munchlax is switched on to the bench, do not discard any special counters attached to May's Munchlax. After damage calculations, put a munch counter on May's Munchlax."
It's so long and lengthy, yes I know, but how else are you suppose to explain it? I'm not a card maker (obviously) but I do try my best to put it into the TCG wording.
As for the attack, it definitely confuses me... you really have to be clear, like the situation with the bench... I'll rather word the attack something like...
"If there is 1 munch counter on May's Munchlax, this attack deals 10 damage. For every additional munch counters attached on May's Munchlax, double the damage dealed by this attack before any calculations. When you have more than 4 munch counters on May's Munchlax, this attack does nothing. When May's Munchlax is switched on to the bench, do not discard any special counters attached to May's Munchlax. After damage calculations, put a munch counter on May's Munchlax."
It's so long and lengthy, yes I know, but how else are you suppose to explain it? I'm not a card maker (obviously) but I do try my best to put it into the TCG wording.