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Hi, erm this is my first ever pokemon fan fic, I've only ever written one other fan fic before. I normally write only my own fiction which is continous (lol it's a long story ;) ). I've only put up a little for now, and if anyone likes it I'll put up a bit more. Feel free to comment, it's a slow beginning, but my prologue gives an idea of what kinda thing it can build upto.
The wind carried her flowing hair away from face. She stood, motionless on the cliff top. Her glass like stare always on the dusty blue sky which clouds of varying grey hues would constantly roll over and interrupt. Even the slight spray from the occasional wave crashing on the cliffs flat face was not enough to move her. Her stare remained on that same spot, never blinking, never changing or flitting to another area.
Then, something broke the dull sky. A tiny black dot seemed to be growing. Growing right in the same place she?d stared at so long. Still she didn?t move and the maple brown creature was now descending fast towards the cliff. It was like a slide show for him. One moment he saw the falling Pidgey, then his sister leaning forward to catch it and then, the empty cliff edge. Her sudden movements had stunned Kiaqo, after watching her not move for so long. It took him time to realise what had happened. Yet all he could see once he?d reached the cliff edge was the choppy waters of a sea awaiting a storm. He fell to his knees; the rain began as the distant rumble of thunder disrupted the silence. "Siko," he muttered, his eyes welling up with glistening tears. He leant over the edge and plunged into crashing waters.
~Chapter 1~
Yiwish watched as the Wingull wheeled and swayed on the fresh breeze. One swooped down lower than the deck, and she clung to the white rail of the ship to watch it play among the Carvanha that had taken the opportunity to cruise through the swift current created by the boat. She took a deep breath of the refreshing air. ?This is the best way to travel,? she thought as the white SS Tidal gleamed in the bright sun of a clear day, its white reflection bouncing off the shimmering water. Hoenn was coming closer now, she watched the flowing green landscape as they floated past to their destination of Little Root Town. It was going to be Yiwish?s second journey. She?d competed only in that of her homeland before. After managing to collect 8 badgers, she just missing the opportunity to enter the pok?mon league. Yi decided not to waste anytime quickly decided that Hoenn would be the best opportunity for her to start a fresh journey with the confidence that she wouldn?t miss the tournament this time. So after the slight detour to Kanto to catch a ship to take her there, she made her way to Hoenn.
The ship soon slowed, and docked in a quiet harbour. Yi collected her belongings and went to leave the ship. As she descended the long gangway she looked around at this place with so much promise. She wanted to stop to take it in, but as she turned to do so, a boy in a red cap pushed past her. Yi wanted to say something or make him stop, but he was carrying a cloth wrapped bundle, and seemed distort, so she let him go on, and he quickly disappeared. She sat down on a wooden bench to gather her self after the long voyage, but she couldn?t push the image of the hurried boy out of her head. She now felt worried, and that maybe she should have offered her help. She shook her head, and got up.
"I?m sure he?s fine," she murmured as she reached for a pok?ball and tried to forget what had happened, "Saocu, we?re finally here."
The eevee leapt into her arms as soon as it was released from the ball. It squeaked in excitement and snuggled close to Yi.
"Isn?t it pretty here Saocu," she said as she left the stairs that lead them to the soft gold sands of a stretching beach. She put the little pok?mon down and it dashed across the sand, leaving a gentle pattern of footprints after it. Yi smiled and look across the long beach. She noticed a person not to far up the beach sitting on the ground, holding a silver item which was glittering in the beaming sun. His light hair seemed to mimic the silver as he hung his head, not even glancing at the beautiful chain he held in front of him. As she drew closer she noticed several tears falling into the yellow sand, and darkening its light colour on the place they?d touched.
"Are you OK?"
~*~
The wind carried her flowing hair away from face. She stood, motionless on the cliff top. Her glass like stare always on the dusty blue sky which clouds of varying grey hues would constantly roll over and interrupt. Even the slight spray from the occasional wave crashing on the cliffs flat face was not enough to move her. Her stare remained on that same spot, never blinking, never changing or flitting to another area.
Then, something broke the dull sky. A tiny black dot seemed to be growing. Growing right in the same place she?d stared at so long. Still she didn?t move and the maple brown creature was now descending fast towards the cliff. It was like a slide show for him. One moment he saw the falling Pidgey, then his sister leaning forward to catch it and then, the empty cliff edge. Her sudden movements had stunned Kiaqo, after watching her not move for so long. It took him time to realise what had happened. Yet all he could see once he?d reached the cliff edge was the choppy waters of a sea awaiting a storm. He fell to his knees; the rain began as the distant rumble of thunder disrupted the silence. "Siko," he muttered, his eyes welling up with glistening tears. He leant over the edge and plunged into crashing waters.
~Chapter 1~
Yiwish watched as the Wingull wheeled and swayed on the fresh breeze. One swooped down lower than the deck, and she clung to the white rail of the ship to watch it play among the Carvanha that had taken the opportunity to cruise through the swift current created by the boat. She took a deep breath of the refreshing air. ?This is the best way to travel,? she thought as the white SS Tidal gleamed in the bright sun of a clear day, its white reflection bouncing off the shimmering water. Hoenn was coming closer now, she watched the flowing green landscape as they floated past to their destination of Little Root Town. It was going to be Yiwish?s second journey. She?d competed only in that of her homeland before. After managing to collect 8 badgers, she just missing the opportunity to enter the pok?mon league. Yi decided not to waste anytime quickly decided that Hoenn would be the best opportunity for her to start a fresh journey with the confidence that she wouldn?t miss the tournament this time. So after the slight detour to Kanto to catch a ship to take her there, she made her way to Hoenn.
The ship soon slowed, and docked in a quiet harbour. Yi collected her belongings and went to leave the ship. As she descended the long gangway she looked around at this place with so much promise. She wanted to stop to take it in, but as she turned to do so, a boy in a red cap pushed past her. Yi wanted to say something or make him stop, but he was carrying a cloth wrapped bundle, and seemed distort, so she let him go on, and he quickly disappeared. She sat down on a wooden bench to gather her self after the long voyage, but she couldn?t push the image of the hurried boy out of her head. She now felt worried, and that maybe she should have offered her help. She shook her head, and got up.
"I?m sure he?s fine," she murmured as she reached for a pok?ball and tried to forget what had happened, "Saocu, we?re finally here."
The eevee leapt into her arms as soon as it was released from the ball. It squeaked in excitement and snuggled close to Yi.
"Isn?t it pretty here Saocu," she said as she left the stairs that lead them to the soft gold sands of a stretching beach. She put the little pok?mon down and it dashed across the sand, leaving a gentle pattern of footprints after it. Yi smiled and look across the long beach. She noticed a person not to far up the beach sitting on the ground, holding a silver item which was glittering in the beaming sun. His light hair seemed to mimic the silver as he hung his head, not even glancing at the beautiful chain he held in front of him. As she drew closer she noticed several tears falling into the yellow sand, and darkening its light colour on the place they?d touched.
"Are you OK?"
~*~