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  • I know righ x[

    Yeah im just closing the threads so you DO only have 2 active rmt threads lol
    I'm making a suspect thread with every OU suspect including the Lati@s, Garchomp, Deoxys-S, Shaymin-Suck, Manaphy, and about everything you can possibly imagine...so you're probably wasting your time (especially since the topic has been argued to death and people just ignore points they can't counter lol). I'll have it done in a few weeks so...

    EDIT: You don't post the thread and THEN ask me for permission -_-
    A update:
    My OU team isn't even close to decent, but I can battle you with it. Sure.
    Thread deleted by Anti
    Reason: Incomplete and needs checked over grammar and spelling wise, I'll work out what I can but for now it's too incomplete

    Basically that. There's a lot of spelling/grammar (and I guess formatting) mistakes that you need to fix. Basically, you need to proofread it. The big thing is that it's incomplete though. What you have (once it's spelling and grammar edited) isn't bad,it's just incomplete. The strategy section isn't really strategy, it's more of useful tips (which are definitely true but hardly strategy). The other )bigger) thing it's missing is team building. You have a very good start, but it is incomplete in the sense that it just throws Pokemon at you...which is fine, but there also needs to be explanation on how to get them to work together and more importantly, how to make them not metagame weak (which is the tough part about Rain Dance and I can't seem to figure it out myself so I'm pretty useless on tips for that). what you do have on that isn't really explained. Oh, first person and second person are bad for formal stuff...but second person is okay since it's a guide, but avoid using "I" since that makes it sound personal preference-ish.

    Remember, it doesn't have to be perfect when you post it, but I'd like it to be proofread (twice would be preferred) and it needs to be complete. Basically, add in what I said and anything else you feel is needed, proofread it, and it should be good to post. Nothing is moved to a sticky right away so I won't hold you to a ridiculously high standard.

    Oh, don't do it all in one night. Writer's block = lower quality usually. I'd take a break and resume tomorrow or later (I don't know your time zone so...)

    Good start.
    Using Shedinja in OU battles is like bringing your best thumb war thumb to a laser beam fight.

    I mean if you're going to do a specific team building thread, you pretty much have to know it inside and out (ESPECIALLY with the enigma that is Rain offense). Having some success probably needs more experience. I mean you can make it now if you want, but it's going to need to be really good (as in, you explain the subtleties and important details, strategies, support needed, and all of it that you need to know when building a Rain Dance team, not just a basic outline since rain Dance is much more than basic) or I'm not going to approve it...especially since very specific guides are pretty unprecedented here (usually we leave Smogon to that since quite frankly, we don't have the space for many more of these and nobody wants to read through 15 or 20 compiled guides). Just so ya know.

    Just be sure you know the topic inside out...almost literally.
    That depends I good it is I suppose. I guess some questions would be:

    Have you ever built a GOOD Rain Dance team?
    Have you ever has success using a Rain Dance team?
    Have you had success stopping Rain Dance teams?

    Rain Dance is one of the hardest strategies in Pokemon to pull off so you have to be a total expert to do a guide on it imo. That's why I ask (and please do be honest =p)
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