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Reason: Incomplete and needs checked over grammar and spelling wise, I'll work out what I can but for now it's too incomplete
Basically that. There's a lot of spelling/grammar (and I guess formatting) mistakes that you need to fix. Basically, you need to proofread it. The big thing is that it's incomplete though. What you have (once it's spelling and grammar edited) isn't bad,it's just incomplete. The strategy section isn't really strategy, it's more of useful tips (which are definitely true but hardly strategy). The other )bigger) thing it's missing is team building. You have a very good start, but it is incomplete in the sense that it just throws Pokemon at you...which is fine, but there also needs to be explanation on how to get them to work together and more importantly, how to make them not metagame weak (which is the tough part about Rain Dance and I can't seem to figure it out myself so I'm pretty useless on tips for that). what you do have on that isn't really explained. Oh, first person and second person are bad for formal stuff...but second person is okay since it's a guide, but avoid using "I" since that makes it sound personal preference-ish.
Remember, it doesn't have to be perfect when you post it, but I'd like it to be proofread (twice would be preferred) and it needs to be complete. Basically, add in what I said and anything else you feel is needed, proofread it, and it should be good to post. Nothing is moved to a sticky right away so I won't hold you to a ridiculously high standard.
Oh, don't do it all in one night. Writer's block = lower quality usually. I'd take a break and resume tomorrow or later (I don't know your time zone so...)
Good start.