lol, sorry. remember, its my first fanfic, so its pretty choppy. no offence, but sometimes i feel like the reader focus on what i did that was wrong and bad, instead of looking more at what i did right and good, like zekshirom's description. im not saying you do that, but its what most readers do to storys like this one. thanks for the feedback, i'll do the announcement today, because im moving on the every other day i make a chapter. keep following the story and sending feedback when you can!