Dude, if you REALLY found some Grammar Mistakes, POST
screenshots! I don't know what are you're talking about.
Also, I highly doubt that there are LOTS of Grammar Mistakes.
There's only a few. I checked the Rom LOADS of times!
Okay, I just went through and played through the beginning sections again. Here's what I found.
Intro:
"In this region you will owe to watch out": This doesn't make sense. It's clunky and an improper use of the word owe. It should say "In this region you should watch out"
"the dream to the reality" should be "dream from reality".
"the light to the dark" should be "the light from the dark"
"the good to the evil" should be "the good from the evil"
"A secret that goes at the edge of the world" also doesn't make much sense. Replace 'goes' with 'resides' and it would make more sense.
"During the night you start to sweat": There should be a comma between 'night' and 'you'
"You are awaken": I'm not sure what this is supposed to be. Is it supposed to be "awoken"? Either way, it needs to be fixed.
Dream:
"You made me waiting": Improper verb tense. It should be 'wait'.
"It must be only a dream": It should be "It must only be a dream"
"Damn answer me!": These are two separate thoughts. It should be "Damn! Answer me!"
"What the? It's shaking?": "What the" isn't a sentence. Using an ellipse instead of a question mark after it would make more sense