rate my team please :)

[Zlayr]

hello
im working on a new team on my soul silver game at the moment and i want your opinions of it :) what is good and what can i change?

the pokemons so far is

Crobat (Docile nature)
Ability: Inner Focus
Attacks:
Roost
Confuse Ray
Fly
Cross Poison

Heracross (Jolly nature)
Ability: Swarm
Attacks:
Shadow claw
Brick break
Aerial ace
Close combat
(i will change out one of the atacks for mega horn but im not shure witch attack kinda thinking about shadow claw)

Aggron (brave nature)
Ability: Rock Head
Attacks:
Rock slide
Iron Defense
Iron Head
Iron Tail

Ursaring (Carefull Nature)
Ability: Quick Feet
Attacks:
Faint Attack
Yawn
Earthquake
Slash

Slowbro (Hardy nature)
Ability: Oblivius
Attacks:
Yawn
Psychic
Slack Off
Surf

and as my last pokemon im planing to have a dragonite :)

 

[NintendoDweeb]

I love your team :3
And yeah. i'd rid of Heracross' Shadow Claw for Megahorn. ;D

 

[bobandbill]

Going to move this in the In-game Team Help section as that's where this sort of stuff belongs.

 

[Zlayr]

I love your team :3
And yeah. i'd rid of Heracross' Shadow Claw for Megahorn. ;D

Oh my ^^ thank you i guess^^

Going to move this in the In-game Team Help section as that's where this sort of stuff belongs.

Thanks :) i knew it was supposed to be in a special kind of section but could not renember where :P

 

[Arma]

hello
im working on a new team on my soul silver game at the moment and i want your opinions of it :) what is good and what can i change?

the pokemons so far is

Crobat (Docile nature)
Ability: Inner Focus
Attacks:
Roost
Confuse Ray
Fly
Cross Poison

It's okay

Heracross (Jolly nature)
Ability: Swarm
Attacks:
Night Slash
Stone Edge
Megahorn
Close combat
(i will change out one of the atacks for mega horn but im not shure witch attack kinda thinking about shadow claw) Yup, Replace it with Night Slash. You don't need 2 moves of the same type on a pokemon.

Aggron (brave nature)
Ability: Rock Head
Attacks:
Stone Edge
Iron Defense
Iron Head
Earthquake

I really suggest breeding a female member of the Aron line with a Male member of the Cranidos line whoknows Head Smash. This way you'll get an Aron who Knows Head Smash, just make sure your Aron has Rock Head as its ability. If you think that's too much trouble, stick with the set above.

Ursaring (Carefull Nature)
Ability: Quick Feet
Attacks:
Crunch
Swords Dance
Earthquake/Close Combat
Return

More powerfull moves, Swords Dance will prove to be more help full then Yawn.

Slowbro (Hardy nature)
Ability: Oblivius
Attacks:
Flamethrower
Surf
Ice Beam
Shadow Ball
Psychic is only super effective vs Poison and Fighting, both type are already covered by other pokemon from your team. This set will allow you to hit much more for super effective.

and as my last pokemon im planing to have a dragonite :)

Dragonite is good, I suppose

Edits in bold, hope this helps you!

 

[Zlayr]

Dragonite is good, I suppose

Edits in bold, hope this helps you!

i realy like the changes however i cant get a pokemon whit head smash in my game (that was my ide from the begining too) if i dont want to catch a relichant andr train it to lvl 78 also i wont remove the yawn from ursaring otherwise i realy like this

 

[Zlayr]

ok so now i made a few changes after realy thinking things thru :)
Crobat (Docile nature)
Ability: Inner Focus
Attacks:
Roost
Confuse Ray
Fly
Cross Poison

Heracross (Jolly nature)
Ability: Swarm
Attacks:
Shadow claw
Megahorn
Aerial ace
Close combat


Aggron (brave nature)
Ability: Rock Head
Attacks:
Rock slide
Iron Defense
Iron Head
earthquake

Ursaring (Carefull Nature)
Ability: Quick Feet
Attacks:
Faint Attack
Yawn
Earthquake
Slash

Slowbro (Hardy nature)
Ability: Oblivius
Attacks:
Yawn
Shadowball
Slack Off
Icebeam

And also i hatched a dratini
Nature: (i dont renember the name but it higtens sp atk and lowers atk)
Ability: Shed skin

Attacks:
Flamethrower
Water Pulse
Thunderbolt
Draco Meteor

 

[smurf]

love the team but if it was me id train slowbro and make it a slowking

 

[Zlayr]

love the team but if it was me id train slowbro and make it a slowking

you cant make a slowbro into a slowking?

 

[Pika-power]

Trade it with a king's rock to evolve it.

 

[Garrabutártulo]

Trade it with a king's rock to evolve it.

Slowpoke traded with king's rock evolves into Slowking. Slowbro can't evolve...