Registeel's Cards

[RegisteelX]

hey, this is the first card i EVER made

hope you like it

my first good Card

my first Energy Card

and my first theme deck

take the pokemon TCG to a new strategy! attack with Shaymin while Breloom is giving you grass energy from the bench with his poke-power ''grass give''. heal yourself a few times with Ultra Potion, while Sunflora brings it back for you after 2 turns! use some Prime Energy to fire up Breloom! nothing can stop you now!!

the very first self made double deck on Internet

if sombody likes it, TELL ME
and i will make a tutorial :)​

 

[Tropical Sunlight]

We both know you need to improve. What program are you using?


The card:

• no HP
• incorrect fonts
• incorrect placement
• nice picture :), but try blurring the edges to get a smoother result
• for the text; try looking at TCG cards with similar texts and copy it, so it won't be so... sick. Use dots and commas.

The theme deck:

• us-suitable background
• some white parts around Shaymin and the logo
• plain text

You can improve and you will! Just play with the program (is it PS?) and you'll get it soon.
Good luck.

 

[RegisteelX]

We both know you need to improve. What program are you using?


The card:

• no HP
• incorrect fonts
• incorrect placement
• nice picture :), but try blurring the edges to get a smoother result
• for the text; try looking at TCG cards with similar texts and copy it, so it won't be so... sick. Use dots and commas.

The theme deck:

• us-suitable background
• some white parts around Shaymin and the logo
• plain text

You can improve and you will! Just play with the program (is it PS?) and you'll get it soon.
Good luck.

WOAH!? what?! this is my very first card i ever made T_T, i used the tutorial you gave me
then: what fonts do i need?
and sick?! what the...i used you card for seeing if its right :/
and i coudn't find a blank theme deck, or tin
and i use CS3

 

[Tropical Sunlight]

WOAH!? what?! this is my very first card i ever made T_T, i used the tutorial you gave me
then: what fonts do i need?
and sick?! what the...i used you card for seeing if its right :/
and i coudn't find a blank theme deck, or tin
and i use CS3

Don't be sad, I was just telling you how to improve.

 

[RegisteelX]

Don't be sad, I was just telling you how to improve.

how can i not be sad? its my first card, i thought you liked it

and i don't care the stupid placement and the fonts are OK, on both Tuts they are good, maybe your fonts are wrong!

 

[ShinjisLover]

Honey, you need to calm yourself. It's called constructive criticism. If you're gunna post your cards here, get used to people pointing out flaws. If you're going to get defensive, at least don't act like it. XD

I also have to agree with H2O Turquoise, though I probably would've said it in a bit of a. . Less nice way.

For your first card, it's really not terrible. But it needs HP. . Where did the HP go? Your attack description font needs to be closer to the real attack description font, as this is obviously not it. I understand that you may not have all the fonts (I definitely don't), but you could at least attempt to copy it. If you couldn't, put that in your first post and say you need to get the actual font to avoid having people say that.
As for the picture in the card, it's not too bad, but there are some white outlines. . Everywhere. You should use a smoothing tool to smooth it out like H2O Turquoise said.


As for the theme deck, this is flat-out an eyesore. The white outlines around the fonts and Shaymind are distracting and the black font is too plain. Perhaps you should change the color and the face? That would make it look better.​

 

[RegisteelX]

HP: idk
Fonts: got all

and thanks, but i don't know how to change widht in photoshop cs3

 

[Tropical Sunlight]

HP: idk
Fonts: got all

and thanks, but i don't know how to change widht in photoshop cs3

Go to Window > Paragraph and switch to text. That's it.

 

[RegisteelX]

Go to Window > Paragraph and switch to text. That's it.

not that. in the tutorial they say like this: Gill Sans Condensed Bold, size 19.2 at 89% width

and smoothing tool? how does it looks?

 

[Tropical Sunlight]

not that. in the tutorial they say like this: Gill Sans Condensed Bold, size 19.2 at 89% width

and smoothing tool? how does it looks?

Yes, that's it. I didn't say switch text, I said switch to Text. You can thange the height and the width there.
The smoothing tool is actually the blur tool, looks like a drop.

 

[RegisteelX]

Yes, that's it. I didn't say switch text, I said switch to Text. You can thange the height and the width there.
The smoothing tool is actually the blur tool, looks like a drop.

thanks. i found one thing i can: making Special Energys
look at it in first post

 

[Tropical Sunlight]

The Energy picture rocks, but the text still isn't correct.

 

[spastman]

We both know you need to improve. What program are you using?


The card:

• no HP
• incorrect fonts
• incorrect placement
• nice picture :), but try blurring the edges to get a smoother result
• for the text; try looking at TCG cards with similar texts and copy it, so it won't be so... sick. Use dots and commas.

The theme deck:

• us-suitable background
• some white parts around Shaymin and the logo
• plain text

You can improve and you will! Just play with the program (is it PS?) and you'll get it soon.
Good luck.

He made indeed any fouls, but the attacks and effects looks good, and possible.

 

[RegisteelX]

i added a thunder Steelix

 

[Tropical Sunlight]

The flaws on this card:

1. The attack is way too weak. Maybe remove the part when steelix gets confused and make it do at least 50 damage, maybe 60.

2. I already told you to improve the PokePower and I'm telling you again.

3. The placement of the PokePower symbol is incorect, I think.

That's all I think and remember I'm only telling you how to improve so you can be better.

 

[RegisteelX]

1. yeah......i would have made it stronger
2. Pokepower is good enough
3. its. not. WRONG. i checked it one the pixel

lol, thanks again for your tips :)

 

[Tropical Sunlight]

1. yeah......i would have made it stronger
2. Pokepower is good enough
3. its. not. WRONG. i checked it one the pixel

lol, thanks again for your tips :)

1. Then do it. Never post an unfinished card.
2. That's the point. It's too good. Also the text doesn't have its 'official' order.
3. Whatever, if you say it's correct that's fine with me but I am telling you again it is not correct.

 

[RegisteelX]

i added deck kit of EX Turqouise

 

[spastman]

my first good Card

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Looks indeed realy good, but the attack does to less damage for be real. make it 80 instead of 40, and its a card that can be real!
BTW: it needs a delta spiece logo, because steelix can't be thunder type.

 

[Tropical Sunlight]

Seriously. I know EX Turquoise seems awesome (:)), but you can't make those for me. I mean actually you can, but wouldn't it be better if you made your own set?