Sorry im new this is my first day i didn't mean to post there i never realised i did and sorry its a mistake don't called me imcomatent i just slipped up thats all so thanks for really puting me down and ruining my day i have a low selfasteam as it is without you putting me down like that, and come this is my first day i just thought it would me nice to share with people and to see if they liked the story line i dont mine CREATIVE critism that there to help not lile you just calling poeple names on there first day.