well, if you hadn't screwed it up by changing it, it might not have been, and besides i don't feel like putting that much time and energy into a project that will probably never get better. i'm also working on my game at the mo' if you think that my story is boring, then go ahead make your own, i'm not making another one. i do wish you the best of luck on your game, but i have my own game to worry about right now, and i can't start worrying about someone elses game, or my life would be chaos.